Searria H.

*Quail* before your wrath? :| *Dusts flour from her face and throws oatmeal at everyone, just for the sake of making a mess* :D -Sea-

*Unwilling to sacrifice the beautiful pumpkin pie she made for Thanksgiving, she spill olive oil across the floor and watches everyone slip.* :twisted: -Sea-

*looks down at feet sheepishly* Yeah, just got the e-mail. Thanks. -Sea-

I registered on the back-up site, but when I try to log in, it tells me that I am trying to access an inactive account. Is that supposed to happen? ...

Most of what can be said has been said, but I will do my best. Yes, some parts were a little cliche, but there are only about 27 existing plots ...

No problem. I know how that is. I'm a cellist, myself, so I think the cello can do pretty much anything. *smiles proudly* :wink: What??????? Why? :evil: Fine. I'll just ...

Very interesting poem. You change tense all of a sudden in the middle to past-tense. I think I like it better in present-tense. The mountains sing a song unknown The ...

Hey! I really need help with part one and two of chapter one of "Through Hazel Eyes" posted under Adventure/Action Fiction. Part one: Part two: "I neeeeeed hellllpppp Mrs. Paaaaaaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Very nice. I really felt for the Character. I too, have some nitpicks, though. :D Preface: The bright light of day began to fade and time appeared to become quick. ...

Hi! I'm Searria! Nice to meet you. Okie-Day. This was very grabbing. I already like your MC. :D I like your voice in this piece. My friends used to tell ...

This was very interesting. I was having a rather sun-shiny day, but I just had this strong urge to read this. Anyway.... This doesn't really have a point, but in ...

Hey there! Obviously, I'm Searria, but most people just call me "Sea." Welcome to YWS. Don't forget to check out the rules (keep a 2:1 review to post ratio.) Let ...

I would not so much like to see this in colour, but shaded. It doesn't have any depth right now, and it would be great if you could shade it ...

Umm.. So this is what you come up with in Spanish? :wink: First of all, I think this would be really awesome in colour! There's a little line at the ...

Edited. Thanks Everyone! :D -Sea-